When Marjorie Smith (pictured left) walked into the Idaho Humane Society in Boise several years ago, the 72-year-old was struggling with the recent loss of her son and the 9-11 tragedy. Today, Smith is a firm believer in the power of pet companionship and claims that "[Gus, her adopted dog,] has

“Could A Dog Benefit Your Mental Health?”
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I commend you for composing a coherent and insightful blog entry that supplicates readers to think carefully before adopting a pet. I am an avid proponent for animal adoption, but I agree with you that “animals aren’t toys, and if you can’t dedicate a significant amount of time to taking care of a pooch, you shouldn’t get one.” As an experienced dog owner, I could easily relate to your joys and miseries that accompanied the experience of raising your dog. Although I was very young when my parents brought home a puppy, I believe my parents experienced some concern (which you cleverly termed “canine postpartum depression) after seeing a big hole in the wall created by our new puppy. Thank you for your precaution to potential animal adopters. As I mentioned in my most recent blog entry, many animal shelters are struggling to cope with the 6-8 million cats and dogs that are abandoned each year. It is certainly important to encourage pet adoption by increasing awareness about the advantages of pet ownership, but adopted pets will only end up back in shelters if their adopters are not financially, psychologically, and physically prepared to care for their new companions.
In the remainder of this comment, I hope to provide your readers with a brief synopsis of mental health benefits associated with caring for companion animals. Your link to dog rescuer and trainer Silvia Jay’s blog post titled “Dog Ownership and Mental Illness” is crucial for dispelling the false belief that people with mental illness cannot be good pet owners. Jay’s story about her mentally disable friend who “belongs in the top 1% of amazingly caring and responsible dog owners” is a powerful testament to the competency of pet owners who suffer from mental illnesses such as depression. Further research into this subject brought me to the conclusion that animals make an equally significant contribution to the lives of their mentally ill caretakers. According to Dr. Aaron Katcher of the University of Pennsylvania and Dr. Patricia Gosner of the University of Southern Alabama, animals offer social and emotional benefits to those with mental illnesses. In fact, the Americans With Disabilities Act provides guidelines for training service dogs to mitigate certain mental impairments such as Panic Disorder, Post Traumatic Stress Syndrome (PTSD), and depression. For example, service dogs use their bodies to maintain distance between masters with panic disorder and anyone who may wish to approach them. Since panic disorder patients often react strongly when another person comes too close to them in crowded areas, they cannot accomplish tasks such as shopping on their own or riding on public transportation without the help of their canine companions. Studies on the mental benefits of pet companionship can also be generalized to “normal” individuals who suffer from negative emotions such as stress or anxiety. Researchers have known for a long time that attachment to a pet could combat depression among older persons in situations of personal stress (such as death of a spouse). As another example, a news article by Barry Serafin from ABC News described the role of specially trained therapy dogs as “counselors who never [said] a word” to those who lost loved ones in the 9-11 tragedy. From examining past and present scientific documentation as well as personal testimonies, it is clear that a pet could offer many mental benefits to its loving and responsible owner.
"Pets Good for Mental, Physical Health"
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Your narrative about Gwen Dubay’s experience with her dogs (pictured below) effectively captivates the reader's attention and brought up some interesting quest

As you stated, several studies have shown the relationship between physical health (such as lower blood pressure) and pet ownership. One experiment randomly assigned forty-eight New York stock brokers with hypertension to one of two treatments: ACE inhibitor therapy and pet therapy with either a cat or dog. During periods of high stress, those who acquired pets had significantly lower blood pressure than participants assigned to receive ACE inhibitor therapy. Researchers attributed the positive results of pet therapy to social support offered by the cat or dog. I think this study provides convincing evidence for your blog entry because it differentiated between standard hypertension treatments and pet therapy. While the costs of both treatments may cost the same in the end (considering the price of pet care supplies and hypertension medicine), pet therapy seems to be more beneficial not only because it keeps blood pressure low during periods of high stress, but also because owning a pet has so many other physical and mental benefits. I hope this comment could help you realize the importance of critically analyzing experimental findings and using them to support your arguments. Thank you for your post and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
I was very pleased to read your blog entry this week as I am, myself, an experienced dog owner who has perosnally felt the benefits of owning a pet which helped me through a period of depression. While I was aware that there were inquiries into the benefits of pet ownership for mental health, I was unaware that there were such rigorous studies of the subject. It is clear that you have done extensive amounts of research regarding pet ownership and mental health. You link to several resources within your post that not only help other readers to follow up on this subject, but also present the author with more information that they may not have come across. In this way, you make your comments on their blog very interactive. The manner in which you address the other writers was very effective, as you made your post relevant to their topic. However, I did notice, especially in your first comment section, that you seemed to start off on your own tangent talking about the subject, and related less to Ms. Spark’s post. It would be more beneficial to a reader trying to follow along with your writing if you related more of what you say back to the original blog, as you did in your second comment.
ReplyDeleteI was particularly intrigued by your questions for the writer in your second comment. You asked Ms. Berggoetz to reconsider some of her claims and to do further research into the subject. While it is true that dogs require walking and are therefore more beneficial to physical health, the psychological factors that affect the physical manifestations of stress and trauma are also highly effected by animals. Your comment on this topic was thought-provoking and highly relevant to the writer’s own blog, making your comment especially effective. It is also very clear through this comment and through your first comment that you are seated very strongly in your position promoting the ownership of pets to help individuals deal with mental and physical health problems. It is important when posting on another writer’s blog that you take a strong position and have the evidence to support it, which I feel you did with your comments.