
The scientific community has generated several ideas about how to enhance memory formation, but many of these suggestions lack practicality and applicability. For example, a study found that London taxi drivers have bigger hippocampi than control subjects because their profession involves memorizing the locations of major streets in London. Despite this confirmation of the hippocampus’ role in spatial memory, or the storage of information regarding the location of physical objects in space, most individuals do not have the time or motivation to memorize maps of London or other major cities solely for the purpose of improving spatial memory or enlarging their hippocampi. This gap between scientific research and reality was also manifested in findings that German medical students' hippocampi increased in size as they studied for final exams. Gray matter in the posterior hippocampus increased consistently during and even three months after the learning period. Since I was unable to retrieve the original publication of this study, I could not ascertain the primary factor underlying this change in the hippocampus. However, I did come up with several possible explanations for this phenomenon. Perhaps hippocampal size increases when extra mental effort is required for a task such as studying. Alternately, hippocampal size increase may be dependent on the type of information studied (medicine in this case). Even though the investigation provided evidence for the benefits of testing procedures (finals) in the education system, it is irrelevant to individuals who are no longer in school, most notably the elderly population. Like the taxi driver study, it did not offer any viable solutions for resisting age-related memory decline in the elderly population.
Undoubtedly, there is a large proportion of seniors who live independently despite the inconvenience caused by reduced memory capacities and other cognitive problems. So why should researchers help this population maintain mental competency by proposing new ways to improve memory? According to a researcher who published a paper in the most current issue of the journal Hippocampus, impairment of spatial memory "is one of a number of reasons why older people end up losing their independence." Furthermore, statistics from the American Psychiatric Association show that fifteen to twenty-five percent of elderly people in the United States suffer from significant symptoms of mental illness. If this pattern persists, our health care system must prepare to provide support for at least 18 million of the 72 million American baby boomers who are expected to turn 65 over the next two decades. Since our health care system is already struggling with the number of elderly patients with cognitive degeneration, it is imperative for researchers and physicians to educate the aging population about ways to protect themselves. America's health care system cannot cope with a dramatic increase in the number of elderly patients who require long-term, full time care as a result of severe or even moderate mental decline.

Until recently, most people believed that the intrinsic properties of our brains remain unalterable after birth; we can accumulate knowledge, but we cannot improve our intelligence or our performance on IQ tests no matter how hard we try. Contrary to conventional wisdom, new evidence suggests that physical exercise can alter specific brain region, thus leading to radical improvements in cognitive function. For example, a 2006 study in the Journal of Aging and Physical Activity found that strength training (pictured above) increased participants' working memory span. The higher the level of resistance, the bigger the improvement in short-term memory. At McGill University in Montreal, scholars concluded that participants, ages 62 to 90, who danced two hours twice a week for 10 weeks improved in balance, posture and motor coordination, as well as cognition. Recent experimental data proposed exercise as the most effective way to increase hippocampus size and subsequently improve spatial memory. Researchers discovered that elderly individuals who are physically fit retain key regions of their brain involved in learning and memory. Even though natural aging processes are largely unavoidable, physical exercise is the best way to counteract physical and cognitive decline due to brain volume shrinkage (which begins at a rate of 1% every year after age 65). It also has many physical health benefits as discussed in my previous posts. Crucially, this activity could be accomplished without expensive equipment and could be done virtually anywhere at anytime.
Individuals with impaired cognitive abilities simply cannot live independently and consequently rely on health care professionals for their daily needs. According to the American Geriatrics Society, "mental illnesses, including depression, paranoia, and dementias, such as Alzheimer's disease, are clearly among the most physically, emotionally, and economically devastating illnesses that commonly affect elderly persons. By some accounts, over $15 billion a year are spent on the care of victims of dementias alone." Even though President Obama promises to lower health care costs and make health insurance affordable and accessible to all, his plan does not involve increasing the number of health care providers. As mentioned above, the United States government would have to provide for 18 million baby boomers with significant symptoms of mental illness (within the next two decades) if the current trend continues. Logically, the only way to cater to the increased needs of dependent patients is to sacrifice quality of health care available to each patient. In closing, I strongly urge the government and physicians to promote consistent participation in physical activities because exercise effectively prevents or delays the onset of multiple age-related physical and mental disorders.
Yannie, your article ties together two related topics that are becoming increasingly important in our aging society. Speaking of how exercise, in addition to all of its health benefits to individuals, can increase learning and memory in elderly people brings to light a solution to the problem we all face: aging! I applaud you for bringing this subject to light and incorporating very well-researched articles to it. Your arguments are strong due to the fact that you relied on peer-review articles and identified the weaknesses in them. Moreover, besides identifying some lack of information in the articles, you did not make assumptions about the results of these findings until you had solid evidence to back them up. Incorporating articles from the Hippocampus and the Journal of Aging and Physical Activity were very good ways in establishing your point-of-view. However, I would suggest providing the authors, journal titles, and institutions of all of the articles you mentioned. Being consistent about adding those minor details simply strengthens all of the evidence you brought into the article, not to mention, providing credit for those who conducted the studies.
ReplyDeleteI appreciate the way that you initially grabbed the reader with your use of questions. This brought forth an added level of interaction and led to much interest in reading the rest of your article. Furthermore, your well-formed thesis at the end of the first paragraph does a great job in concisely articulating your argument. There were times when I was distracted by the mix of purple and blue letters, of which the blue links were especially unappreciated by the eye. In addition, the repetitive use of the word study would have been better substituted with various other synonyms describing the research that various scientists had conducted. While your images related to the article, I think it would have been more compelling to use images of the hippocampus that you mentioned. Also, directly linking those images to the websites on which they were found would be more advisable (instead of linking them to the Google search for the image). You paid consistent attention to links between this current post and previous posts that you had published. This was a great way of really sticking with the primary intention of your blog.
Lastly, you mention in the last sentence of your third and fifth paragraph that exercising elderly individuals would be beneficial to the health care system as a whole. This is a very good point you brought up and I wish that you had broadened your discussion on that specific topic even more. Being interested in the healthcare system that is one thing I would find additionally interesting and is pertinent to that ever-changing bureaucracy today. In all, your post tied in many relevant studies and your strong opinions based on them did a great job in presenting to the reader a compelling argument.
Thank you so much for your post. Your topic of interest is something that I have often wondered about and am so pleased that you have done the research and provided your findings on you blog. The way that you have organized our paragraphs seems to be working very well. I find your post to be well written, authoritative, and accurate. The tone you chose to use is appropriate and makes me feel like you are extremely qualified in the topics you delve into. You have provided advanced information for a college student, and I feel like I will be able to benefit from reading your blog. You have effectively proved your thesis by use of the body paragraphs.
ReplyDeleteAlthough your post is exceptionally written and full of factual information, I would like to offer you some constructive criticism. First, it would be beneficial for you to read your post out loud, because there are simple grammatical errors. For example, in your thesis sentence you have missed the work “to” which is a common error that I make quite frequently. I have also noticed that the link to “London taxi drivers” is divided into two, a simple edit would suffice. I also feel that the sentence, where you include, “findings that German medical students’ hippocampi increased in size as they studied for their final exams” could be rewritten to read “findings that “German medical students’ hippocampi increased in size as they studied for their final exams.” The extremely long link is distracting and I think that using quotation marks would be more appropriate. The same problem exists in the sentence reading, “If this pattern persists, our health care system must prepare to provide support for at least 18 million of the 72 million American baby boomers who are expected to turn 65 over the next two decades.” Furthermore, the link connected to “study in the Journal of Aging and Physical Activity” should only be part of the journal title. I also urge you to provide links when referencing organizations such as, the American Psychiatric Association. Thank you for writing this post, I feel like you have introduced me to a new wealth of knowledge. I look forward to reading your posts in the future. Great job!